What's your impression? (it's not sex)

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Permalink Reply by John Karamanski on September 7, 2009 at 7:28pm

"Tell me about you"

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Permalink Reply by Deanna Sipe on September 7, 2009 at 10:53pm

John, what do you want to know that's not on my profile?

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Permalink Reply by Robby Slaughter on September 8, 2009 at 2:13pm

John's making a point that some of the most powerful words in the English language are a request for self-description. This is a play on the old Dale Carnegie aphorism, that everyone's favorite topic of conversation is themselves.

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Permalink Reply by Erik Deckers on September 7, 2009 at 9:51pm

I like the 2nd one. The 3rd one is a little too aggressive.

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Permalink Reply by Deanna Sipe on September 7, 2009 at 10:41pm

Thanks for the feedback Erik. :)

Just to give you a bit more info. It's little known, non-sexual, tool that a man can use with the woman in his life to remove the stress of the day, ease pain or make connection that inspires more intimacy. Women just melt in the chair every time.

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Permalink Reply by Kendal R. Miller on September 8, 2009 at 6:26pm

I agree with Erik #2. #1 is too long, #3 is too suggestive of what you're not trying get men to think about!

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Permalink Reply by Michael W. Gant on September 8, 2009 at 7:45pm

I have to say #3. Look to comedic commentary to have a grasp of what men are thinking, yet will not say, when it come to the women in their lives or those they desire to have in their lives in some way. Though sometimes communicated with the "nicest of intentions", the commentary is often reduced to the terminology utilized in #3. It is my humble opinion that the levity portrayed in that sub-title would grab the attention of many men. Just my four cents due to inflation! :)

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Permalink Reply by Deanna Sipe on September 12, 2009 at 4:36am

Kendal and Michael,

Thanks for your input. I sincerely appreciate yours posts. I am currently at a marketing training in LA and learning a ton about how to put the info in words that work. Let's see what I can come up with when I get back. :)

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Permalink Reply by Cissi Sherlock on September 14, 2009 at 5:34pm

I really like "The Art of Taking a Woman from Bitch to Bliss" and just leave it at that.

IN my opinion that should be enough to attract any man to a book that will help him get along with his mate and get he into bed. IN the title, leave the "bed" part out. It is certainly implied.

If you use my suggestion, can I get my picture in your video? I just like seeing pictures of me!

Good Luck and Smiles!

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